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The Economist: leader endorsing Kamala Harris

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The Economist

London31 October 2024

Leader · The US election

Why we would vote for Kamala Harris

Unsigned · written in the newspaper’s collective voice

Source

Where this is from

Author: The Economist (leaders are unsigned, written in the magazine's collective voice)
Publication: The Economist, Leaders section
Date: 31 October 2024, days before the US presidential election
Form: Magazine leader (endorsement editorial)
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Tone map

The dominant tone and its effects

detached measured authoritative unenthusiastic wary pointed clinical brisk admonitory

detached / clinical wary pointed / admonitory unenthusiastic

Summary

What the leader does, in brief

The magazine says it would vote for Harris, but frames the choice almost entirely as risk avoidance rather than enthusiasm. It grants that Harris is unlikely to be a great president, argues that a second Trump term carries an unacceptable and unquantifiable danger, and addresses itself to reluctant Trump voters. The persuasion is in the cool, actuarial framing.

Techniques

Language techniques

The house voice

No byline; a collective we would vote for….

Effect: the reader hears the settled position of a 180-year-old institution, which carries more weight than a single columnist and is harder to argue with.
Faint praise (concession)

It is hard to imagine Ms Harris being a stellar president.

Effect: conceding the candidate's weakness up front makes the magazine sound clear-eyed rather than partisan, so the case against Trump lands as sober judgement.
The risk frame

Trump is an unacceptable risk; voters would be gambling with the economy, the rule of law and international peace.

Effect: putting the choice in the language of probability and downside suits the magazine's readership and shifts the question from who is better? to what could go wrong?
Admitting uncertainty

We cannot quantify the chance that something will go badly wrong: nobody can.

Effect: conceding that the danger cannot be measured, then arguing it still matters, forecloses the reply that the fears are exaggerated.
Direct address to the undecided

Voters who play down the risk are deluding themselves.

Effect: naming a specific group of readers and telling them they are fooling themselves is a sharp move inside an otherwise dry text; it is meant to unsettle, not comfort.
Brisk, compressed sentences

Short clauses, few adjectives, conclusions stated flatly.

Effect: the clipped style signals confidence and efficiency; the magazine sounds like it has already done the working and is simply reporting the result.

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Practice angle

This is an endorsement that spends much of its length saying lukewarm things about the candidate it endorses. Write a paragraph on how withholding enthusiasm can itself be a persuasive strategy for a publication that trades on its independence.

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